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Title - ( As u Wish,,)
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« Reply #4 on: February 26, 2007, 11:09:03 PM »
akke
dhuka hithena kavi tikak

Unique words akke, most of the time we see very common words in poems but in your poems I am reading deep , but nicely knitted verses :D

 accept my heartiest wishes for you
I can only comment coz I dont knw much abt poetry like u guys do 8)
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« Reply #5 on: February 27, 2007, 09:07:51 AM »
Cleo Akka......

Kiyanna deyak ne ne..... Etharamatama lassanai......

Thawa oyage kavi kiyawanna mata wasanawa athi kiyala mama hithanawa.........

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« Reply #6 on: March 03, 2007, 01:49:28 AM »

« Last Edit: March 03, 2007, 01:54:40 AM by CLEOpAtRa »

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« Reply #7 on: March 03, 2007, 09:14:28 PM »


-----Oyage kavi hari lassanai Cleopatra,  eth eyi ekama subject ekakata kotu wela liyanne.......??????????????-----

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« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2007, 11:01:20 PM »


-----Oyage kavi hari lassanai Cleopatra,  eth eyi ekama subject ekakata kotu wela liyanne.......??????????????-----

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I have No subjects to Compose,,, :D
It's life.

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« Reply #9 on: March 05, 2007, 12:46:40 AM »
--------Oh poor Cleo!....We seldom think of what we have, but always think of what we MISS.....

Don't be a negative minded person, U r the person who can write ur own destiny
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Re: Title - ( As u Wish,,)
« Reply #10 on: March 05, 2007, 05:46:33 PM »
So Cleopatra is still crying for Cesar. Seem like a Right Royal Boot, to me. We all get them in our lives. Part of growing up. It had bought up the Little Milton in you Cleo. Keep writing. We enjoy your originality and the command of Sinhala language.
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« Reply #11 on: March 05, 2007, 09:51:28 PM »
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Re: Title - ( As u Wish,,)
« Reply #12 on: March 11, 2007, 10:02:44 PM »
No SMSs On The Screen,
No Miss Calls,,,
No Off Line Msgs,,
Even A Single E-Mail,,,
From So Called Caring/Loving Friends,,,

On That Day,, 10th March -From Morning Till Next Sun Rise,,
There Were No One, But You, With Me,,

You Were There Caring Me Like No Other,
You Were There Suffering With My Every Breath
You Were There To Cry With Me,,

With Your Consistent Love
Through The Weakest Hours Of My Life,,
Realizing The Bitter Truth,, That There Were No One In This World To Believe,, Except You,,


Amma,, Thank You For All You Have Done.
You R The Most Precious Gift Of All.

(and also thanx to the next door brother, who rushed to the hospital Wt Me, while whole world is sleeping,,)


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« Reply #14 on: March 18, 2007, 12:26:56 AM »
True cleo akka. this poem is sooo sensitive, it brought tears to my eyes and felt a small ache in my heart. I rememberd my Amma when I read your poem

Our Mother and father r the most caring loving and understanding persons on earth who'll bear anything and everything for the well being of our selves

Anthimedi ithiri wenne apita ape demapiyo witharamai..


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« Reply #15 on: April 14, 2007, 08:22:35 PM »
l<la fkdfy,Q iqiqula fkdfy,Q ojila kE cS;fha yuq
fus la ksjkak nK mohla lshkak nqyduqrejfka



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« Reply #16 on: April 14, 2007, 08:40:29 PM »

l<la fkdfy,Q iqiqula fkdfy,Q ojila kE cS;fha yuq
fus la ksjkak nK mohla lshkak nqyduqrejfka



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« Reply #17 on: April 14, 2007, 09:08:19 PM »

l<la fkdfy,Q iqiqula fkdfy,Q ojila kE cS;fha yuq
fus la ksjkak nK mohla lshkak nqyduqrejfka



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« Reply #18 on: April 15, 2007, 02:14:29 PM »
su,

raban padha tika nam hari realistic
kavi panthi dhekama hithata wadhena, dhanena widihata liyala thiyenne

 
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« Reply #19 on: May 01, 2007, 10:32:07 AM »


a very old one
l<la fkdfy,Q iqiqula fkdfy,Q ojila kE cS;fha yuq
fus la ksjkak nK mohla lshkak nqyduqrejfka