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Title: Biththiye Kurutu Gema
Post by: Sudeera on October 17, 2007, 09:33:00 AM
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Title: Ankura nirmana karuwange as bandeema
Post by: Sudeera on May 15, 2008, 10:46:29 PM
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Title: Re: Biththiye Kurutu Gema
Post by: mini on May 19, 2008, 04:49:14 AM
godak watina adhahas pala kireemak sigiri karala thiyenne..  oyage palamuwana adahas dakweemata anuwa, ada kavi liyannan ithamath ihala mattamin eya pawathwagena yana atharama.....ewata wenas magaka yannawun liyana kavi walata .......mewath kavida .....?? kiya asanne tharam pahath mattamaka pawathina bawanam kisima sakayakin thoramawa kiya sitinnee...ewannek nisa kavi liweema / forum hi thama adahas pala kireema sampurnayen ath hara damu pirisak daka athi wu anukampaweni.... :?

thamage liyawilla desa abhimanayen balana mowun.....wenath kavi desa balana apahasa balma pamanak nova...pawasana dewal dakeemada kalakirimak athi karawannak.   parani kaviyak opa mattam dama ema kathuwarayata  thamanuth samanayayi penwannata darana uthsahayada....ithama hasyajanaka bawanam kiwa yuthumaya... :lol:
Title: Re: Biththiye Kurutu Gema
Post by: Sudeera on May 21, 2008, 10:17:36 PM
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