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Title: A Sad Touching Story...
Post by: ~~SvEeT ZaRa~~ on November 14, 2010, 03:45:03 PM
waited for him to reach and fetch me.

Itís been fifteen minutes.

He told me heíd reach in five minutes.

I was rather frustrated.

Then he finally arrived.

He offered me the motorcycle helmet.

Why were you so late, I asked.

He was nonchalant. Not even a little hint of

guilt.

Oh..was watching tv, he said.

Watching tv? Why donít you bathe, eat, nap then

come down here, I raised my voice.

Iím sorry, he said in a voice I never heard

before.

No explanation.

Nothing.

Just a simple sorry.

But it was the first time Iíd heard him say

sorry.

Yes.

Oh well.

So I took the helmet.

And many times after that, he apologized for

being late.

Countless times.

He never gave the explanation.

And one day I couldnít take it anymore.

Why donít you ever explain why youíre sorry, I

asked, my temper boiling up.

Iím sorry, he said.

That was the 98th time he said sorry to me.

Why do you have to say sorry? Canít you just

explain to me, I practically screamed at me.

Iím sorry, he said.

That was the 99th time he said sorry to me.

Letís break up, I said. Iíve had enough of your

non-existent explanations.

And I left.

I lost all contact with him.

I never looked him up.

Neither did he look me up.

And a month later, I knew I was still in love

with him.

I couldnít contain my feelings for him inside

anymore.

So I went to look for him.

I went to his school, and they said he had

stopped schooling for a month already.

I called his phone, and no one picked up.

I called his friend.

Heís in hospital now. He has congenitial heart

disease. Didnít you know, asked his friend.

No, I said. Where is he now?

XX hospital, he replied and put down the phone.

I practically ran to the hospital.

He was there, face as white as could be.

I knelt down, crying, by his bedside.

Why didnít you tell me earlier, I cried.

He opened his eyes tiredly, and smiled.

Iím sorry, he said.

Donít say sorry, just donít die. PleaseÖI

havenít forgiven you yet, I cried out, my tears

and sobs choking me.

And he closed his eyes forever.

I collapsed on his bed.

Why?

Why did you have to leave me so early?

His hands were tightly grasped to a bundle of

papers.

On the first one, he wrote: I didnít mean to be

late. Iím sorry. I didnít want to tell you that

I felt my chest hurt terribly when I stepped out

of the house. But I still made an effort to

come. Forgive me, wonít you?

On the second, he wrote: ÖÖ

On the third, he wrote: ÖÖ

I read through all of them, my tears never

stopping.

On the hundredth, there was a photograph

attached.

He was smiling as radiantly as he could, for me.

His face was white, but I could see the genuine

smile.

He wrote: Iím sorry, dear. I didnít mean to

leave before you. I didnít mean to make you cry.

I left because god didnít give me a chance to

put a ring on your finger and say I love you.

You were the first girl I said sorry to, and the

only one whom I wanted to spend my life with.

Please, donít cry. I donít want to see you cry.

How could I not cry?
Title: Re: A Sad Touching Story...
Post by: w乇乃ᄊム丂イ乇尺 on November 14, 2010, 04:18:18 PM
What an emotional story?

Dear SvEeT ZaRa,
Thanking for posting such sensitive and emotional sharing..

(still i don;t know whether this was your true incident, an incident you heard, copied from other place or your imagination..)

Anyhow, i was embarrassed when read it.
Because, some persons among you and me (maybe you or me) being keeping silent as long as they have the strength.

But, how many do know that a big story behind that silent? may be the all persons will realize that "big story" some day when a day which decided by the destiny.


Thanking you.!
- WeBBy
Title: Re: A Sad Touching Story...
Post by: ~~SvEeT ZaRa~~ on November 14, 2010, 05:08:45 PM
What an emotional story?

Dear SvEeT ZaRa,
Thanking for posting such sensitive and emotional sharing..

(still i don;t know whether this was your true incident, an incident you heard, copied from other place or your imagination..)

Anyhow, i was embarrassed when read it.
Because, some persons among you and me (maybe you or me) being keeping silent as long as they have the strength.

But, how many do know that a big story behind that silent? may be the all persons will realize that "big story" some day when a day which decided by the destiny.

 Thanking you.!
- WeBBy

U r welcome.Actually this was my own story.This happens before five years ago.

Title: Re: A Sad Touching Story...
Post by: w乇乃ᄊム丂イ乇尺 on November 14, 2010, 05:26:03 PM
:018: I'll not mention the all thoughts in my mind now except SORRY 
Title: Re: A Sad Touching Story...
Post by: ~~SvEeT ZaRa~~ on November 14, 2010, 05:45:41 PM
:018: I'll not mention the all thoughts in my mind now except SORRY

If you want to mention ur thoughts you can do it. :003:I know he is still with me
Title: Re: A Sad Touching Story...
Post by: w乇乃ᄊム丂イ乇尺 on November 14, 2010, 07:01:37 PM
No, I have already committed my self not to expose them.
But, i strongly appreciate your way of present your emotions..!

:045: Keep writing..!

-WeBBy
Title: Re: A Sad Touching Story...
Post by: ~~SvEeT ZaRa~~ on November 18, 2010, 11:02:09 AM
That's up to you Admin